Sunday

Sunday

A Poem by Michael Oliver
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I should have gone to church but thought ....nah so before work doodled this

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Blinds and windows - rain and rain
Splashing - a plashing - a dripping - rain
Shines slates - ripples wind - weaves branches
Beneath a gray plain rain raining

Chicken roasts - the air seduced 
Coffee prays an incense of temptation
So day comfortable - window mist wrapped 
Silence - silence - the peace - the Sabbath

© 2014 Michael Oliver


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So to the point and yet not lacking in images and truth. Lovely, just lovely.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Shines slates - ripples wind - weaves branches
Beneath a gray plain rain raining.

I like this. It is simple, yet elegant.

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on January 26, 2014
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Michael Oliver
Michael Oliver

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I like capturing the world in various mediums for a long time I was a painter, but more recently I realize the same imperative can be used to direct words as well as brushes. more..

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