Her

Her

A Poem by MichaelGrisby

Your flaws make you perfect,

Something I wouldn’t neglect,

More so respect,

Baby, just take my hand,

I know it seems a little suspect,

My loving is defect,

Without you


© 2013 MichaelGrisby


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Emotional. You didn't have to say too much. Got my emotions rolling. Love is a beautiful thing. Taken away, it can destroy a person.

Posted 12 Years Ago


awwwh, poor half side of the heart

Posted 12 Years Ago


This casual seemingly slight poem kicks off with a profound paradox and all those clunky end rhymes simply add to the charm of the piece. Delightful.

Posted 12 Years Ago


MichaelGrisby

12 Years Ago

Thank you very much.
John

12 Years Ago

Your very welcome.

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Added on May 9, 2012
Last Updated on February 19, 2013
Tags: Love, Life, Heart, Happy, Smile, Us, You, Me