Element Z Character profile- Hydrogen

Character profile for my Graphic novel

Name: Hydrogen

Race: Chemical Element

Eye color: Blue

Hair color: Black

Date of Birth: September 28th because it is the day of a total eclipse. 

Super hero personality: Loner , Serious, Daring, Individualistic, Strong

Talents and Abilities: Shape-shifting , Light , Very Swift

Fatal Flaw: Stubborn, tense, Arrogant, Judgmental , Doesn't know when to admit defeat. His most notable flaw is his  weakness during a total eclipse.

Origin story: Being the first element to walk the earth hydrogen considers himself to be a God. He lives on earth and can be found lurking throughout the night. Hydrogen was been traveling the earth since he first arrived , He travels to become stronger and knows there are other elements like him out in the world but only one can be Number 1.

Author's Note

Feedback on the character.

Reviews

[David Jae]

An interesting character. Perhaps a little one sided, at this point. Not knowing when to admit defeat is a good flaw for a Hero, but there must be more to him. What are his motivations? You say he wants to be Number One. How will he achieve this? By destroying the other elements. Or by changing the world.

This has a lot of potential, but it is hard to judge without knowing the wider context of the story.

[Coyote Poetry]

I enjoyed this chapter. You create strong character and birth. Need strong characters and their background to make the reader part of the story.
Coyote

[Berniemacsgreatesthi]

It's not a chapter It's a character description......but thank you