~ Snowflake ~

Valentine's Collection. 2022. Sonnet.

~ Snowflakes ~

Snowflakes are dancing in the frosty air, 

they gently caress your hand and your face, 

softly they dance over your Auburn hair, 

illuminating the dawn of your grace. 

Tiny snowflakes are dancing all around, 

they are tumbling down from a light grey sky, 

around you there is not a single sound, 

your heart is enthralled as the snow does lie.

Oh, passion divine ~ you are my sweet song,

as snowflakes fall, my arms enfold you,

within your arms I shall ever belong,
I shall share with you ~ a love that is true.

Oh, tiny snowflake ~ you light up my night,

dance and frolic in your wonderful flight. 

   

Reviews

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

Truly perfect
Love this romantic snow place piece

[Unspoken poet]

I love this write, wonderful and beautiful write

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Shadrach… snowflake ballerinas dance on their toes in a Sleeping Beauty Silent Night… where music 🎶 plays on Moonbeam's Light…
Merry Christmas Mike…. Softly, Pat

[K writes]

This is such a wonderful and beautiful write

[William Michael Reeves]

I pictured you out writing in the snow, the warmth of your words melting the crystals before they land to chill your passion. Your thoughts lit in illumination.

[Carlos Lorenzo Estrada]

I agree with Patricia and her assessment on this poem. It truly is an enchanting piece of poetry. There is a beauty you give to the falling of snowflakes that resonate with love. An excellent poem Mike.

[Patricia]

Oh wow! Absolutely glorious and enchanting, I truly enjoyed this!

[lightsong]

Ok I am JEALOUS! I wanted to write about the "snowflake" from a month. but I am so un-inspired, even that poem which I have been writing from ages lie lazy. "illuminating the dawn of your grace" love this line, your sonnet again radiates with delight... You give us joyous feelings. Thank You dear Mike~

[Relic]

So well done. I appreciate a poem that is put together with care and good form.

Beautifully done.