My Paradise.

Valentine's Collection. 2022. Sonnet.

19 ….. My Paradise.

You are my moon within my dreams of peace, 

the joy of love it does shine from your face,

your heart does sing and love it does release, 

my love you shall walk with an angel’s grace.

Together in Heaven we both shall sing, 

forever you shall make my sorrow cease, 

too thoughts of love’s endeavour we can cling, 

you are my moon within my dreams of peace.

You are the joy that makes my heart to sing, 

 you are Luna who lights up velvet night, 

into a lonely heart love you do bring, 

ever you shall be my Heavenly light.

My serenade it shall ever echo, 

in love divine great joy we ever know.

Reviews

[Ranger Kessel]

What a lovely statement of love. Your name reminds me of a story by Philip k dick. I enjoyed this.

[Fictional Fabricator]

You are my moon within my dreams of peace, such a lovely line and right away my favorite.

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

I read this twice
It’s perfection

[AMMD]

Hear the heart singing of newfound love here. The authenticity and playfulness is really nice

[William Michael Reeves]

Beautiful! I have a question. Your use of the word too. Too thoughts of love's endeavor we can cling. I want to believe that was intentional, so I read it using the word also. Which worked, so I'm convinced it was intentional. It's like whichever way I read it with every use of the word to, too and even the number two, worked. Which I believe means it is write, right? But for all I know it's a typo?
I should go back and start at the beginning if this is 19.