In The Wondrous Sun.

Valentine's |Collection. 2022. Rhyme.

14 ….. In The Wondrous Sun.

Come, my beloved, let’s stand in the sun,

come join me, our love has just begun, 

my precious queen, let love’s river now run, 

we do share our love in the wondrous sun.

Let me lose myself in your eyes that shine, 

and our love, it shall never be betrayed, 

stand now, before me, in beauty divine, 

the wonder of our deep love arrayed.

Glory I behold as I look on you, 

so warm and inviting, a love so true, 

now come and see me, each kiss feels so new. 

your temple before me in Summer blue.

Let us now ascend to love’s brilliant sky, 

you are now in my arms, my precious sun, 

lie here with me where the eagles do cry, 

I now lie with you, all my battles won.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Wonderful words and thoughts shared.
"Glory I behold as I look on you,
so warm and inviting, a love so true,
now come and see me, each kiss feels so new.
your temple before me in Summer blue."
The above lines. I did like a lot. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

[shadrach hah]

Hi Coyote, thank you for dropping by and the review on this piece, it is much appreciated. The heart is still singing and the song is love. I am so glad you liked the piece. May the love keep singing. Have a wonderful Thursday....Michael.

[Coyote Poetry]

Was my pleasure Michael and you are welcome.

[Chris Shaw]

Such a delight to read this beautiful love poem with its touching poetic expression. A truly fine piece of writing. It's been a while since you posted. I note this is an older poem. All the best to you dear poet.

Chris

[Miss Sharon]

WOWSER! What a wonderful poem of love. I especially enjoyed this stanza...(Let us now ascend to love’s brilliant sky, you are now in my arms, my precious sun, lie here with me where the eagles do cry, I now lie with you, all my battles won.) Now THAT'S my idea of real poetry! ~Sharon

[emmajoy]

' .. you are now in my arms, my precious sun, - lie here with me where the eagles do cry, '

'Four stanzas, a hand-full of finely chosen words.
heart felt magic superbly re.create that precious word: Love. This is a beautiful poem.

[lightsong]

YES! from the moon to the sun! in nights and daylights love all there, Love, love this one so much, it sparks with twinkling glitters of romance, peace, delight and passion. Thank You dear Micheal ✨

[shadrach hah]

Hi Gounwah, thank you for dropping by and the review on this piece, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. Thank you for dropping by. Within love's dreams, love is sung by night and day. Both have to shine equally, although, I have to admit, I do so love the night. This one sings for me. Have a wonderful Thursday. Love and Hugs always....Michael.

[Patricia]

oh the love of a good woman! they make men write beautiful poetry! very intense, an urgency and longing, ooo love feeling that in a good love poem.

[shadrach hah]

Hi Patricia, thank you for dropping by and the review on this piece, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. I agree, the ladies can make us write beautiful poetry, they are the true muse. There is always a longing when the heart is singing. Love is the eternal song. Have a wonderful Thursday. Hugs always....Michael.

[Patricia]

You're welcome! Hugs to you!