It really sucks that an ad is in such a beautiful poem before it ends. How rude of them! Whoever they are. Liked your rhyme scheme. I'm trying to figure out what 9 relates to?
Posted 2 Years Ago
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2 Years Ago
Hi William, thank you for dropping by and the review on this piece, it is much appreciated. I always.. read moreHi William, thank you for dropping by and the review on this piece, it is much appreciated. I always wondered how those ads came in. Maybe someone is trying to tell me that the poem is too long. The number 9 just relates to the fact that this is the ninth poem in my Valentine's Collection. Have a wonderful Tuesday....Mike.
lovely poem i was lucky to come across my first time back in months. I am an incurable romantic so reading poems like this are a sweet delight.
Posted 2 Years Ago
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2 Years Ago
Hi, it is a pleasure to meet you. Thank you for dropping by and the review on this piece, it is much.. read moreHi, it is a pleasure to meet you. Thank you for dropping by and the review on this piece, it is much appreciated. I have to admit, I am also an incurable romantic. Romance is in the blood. Have a wonderful Tuesday. Love and Hugs always....Mike.
Hi Lady K, thank you for dropping by and the review on this piece, it is much appreciated. I am so g.. read moreHi Lady K, thank you for dropping by and the review on this piece, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. I love to let the heart sing as it chooses. Have a wonderful Tuesday. Hugs always....Mike.
This form and this piece absolutely flows like a song, it has music... sweet like honey, gentle like a flower... tender like a dream, another delightful read to end the day with dear Mike.
Posted 2 Years Ago
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2 Years Ago
Hi Gounwah, thank you for dropping by and the review on this piece, it is much appreciated. I have w.. read moreHi Gounwah, thank you for dropping by and the review on this piece, it is much appreciated. I have written in this form a few times. I am so glad you liked the piece. Letting the heart sing. Have a wonderful Tuesday. Love and Hugs always....Mike.
A strongly crafted poem paying homage to love. "We now dance into a moonbeam,
we love within the starlight gleam, " this line especially really captures the heart of this work, Mike. Very nicely done my friend.
Posted 2 Years Ago
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2 Years Ago
Hi Carlos, thank you for dropping by and the review on this piece, it is much appreciated. I must al.. read moreHi Carlos, thank you for dropping by and the review on this piece, it is much appreciated. I must always pay homage to love, it is the eternal song. The heart shall ever sing. I am so glad you liked the piece. Have a wonderful Tuesday....Mike.