Within A Moonbeam.

Valentine's Collection. 2022. Sonnet.

8 ….. Within A Moonbeam.

Now before your glory, love is supreme, 

my beloved in glory, high above, 

love begins within a silver moonbeam, 

my heart, it now sings with the joy of love.

My love, you are ever my shining sun, 

I hold your grace, beauty in a moonbeam, 

together we kiss when the dream is done, 

love’s door ever opens when we do dream.

My beloved, your smile does light up my heart, 

we stand in the heart of dream’s timeless sea, 

to a valley from which we shall never part, 

being with you is where I wish to be.

Come my beloved, come into my core, 

together we leave behind love’s own door.

Reviews

[lightsong]

"love begins within a silver moonbeam", "I hold your grace, beauty in a moonbeam", "Within A Moonbeam", to live within a moonbeam... your mind always have these romantic thoughts, I specially love those and the joy and delight they hold when one thinks of them, oh yes and the last two playful lines there :>

[shadrach hah]

Hi Gounwah, thank you for dropping by and the review on this piece, it is much appreciated. You will have guessed that the moon holds me in its thrall. It makes the heart to sing as it chooses. Love ever sings in the stars. Have a wonderful Wednesday. Love and Hugs always....Mike.

[mattavelli]

Hello, Shadrach! :)
I like the feeling of this poem, and the concept of love in a moonbeam, but not the way you've organized and phrased your thoughts and feelings here. Thanks for sharing your poetry.

[shadrach hah]

Hi, my friend, thank you for dropping by and the review on this piece, it is much appreciated. Sometimes you get it right, sometimes you get it wrong. It always depends on what each poet sees in the piece. I thank you once more for the review. Each review helps us become better at what we do. Thank you for dropping by....Mike.

[Cherrie Palmer]

I love a sonnet and always enjoy reading another writer's contribution to the sonnet. I'm so glad I found this one.

[shadrach hah]

Hi Cherrie, thank you for dropping by and the review on this piece, it is much appreciated. I always love reading sonnets. They always make my heart sing. I love letting the heart sing. Have a wonderful Wednesday. Hugs....Mike.

[poetgurl]

This is a wonderful write, love the rhyme scheme

[shadrach hah]

Hi Lady K, thank you for dropping by and the review on this piece, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. The sonnet always sings for me. May the romance ever sing. Have a wonderful Wednesday. Hugs always....Mike.