we have read many stories about Vampires, but what I like about yours that first it's a poetical series, second as I read this one specially what I feel is more about two old souls who shared many lives together not only a cliche story of Vampires, and this touches me more, this one I like the most of those about I read of your Vampyre series because it speaks everything, your rhythm again is so wonderful~ Hugs*
Posted 3 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
3 Years Ago
Hi Gounwah, thank you for dropping by and the wonderful review, it is much appreciated. The Vampyre .. read moreHi Gounwah, thank you for dropping by and the wonderful review, it is much appreciated. The Vampyre are the oldest of souls. I enjoy writing this series. Hugs....Mike.
again great rhythm and rhyme and dreamy, this is saucy and I like that, definitely has a bite to it. dragon bed...I love that, great piece.
Posted 2 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
2 Years Ago
Hi Patricia, thank you for dropping by and the review on this piece, it is much appreciated. I wrote.. read moreHi Patricia, thank you for dropping by and the review on this piece, it is much appreciated. I wrote the title of this before I wrote the poem for the thoughts, (the memories) were there in my head. I like writing these. Have a wonderful evening. Huges always....Mike.
Vampyre hugh? Wow, This is wonderful. They are of Ancient in form. Nicely done.
They live and breathe kind of like humans do. Least that is my opinion.
Posted 3 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
3 Years Ago
Hi Kerra, thank you for dropping by and the review on this piece, it is much appreciated. The Vampyr.. read moreHi Kerra, thank you for dropping by and the review on this piece, it is much appreciated. The Vampyre are the most ancient of their kind, they are the first, God's vengeance upon evil they were. They are as too humans in their love. They have heart and soul. Hugs always....Mike.
I am not feeling a vampire vibe from this piece, but rather, this feels like ordinary romance between slightly weird but normal humans. I'm not getting any neck bites or much spooky ambiance here. But these things are not necessary. It's just a response to your claim that you have a "vampire collection" (evidently). When I remove the whole vampire expectation (a vibe I find to be mostly missing), this is simply a well-balanced nostalgic-sounding ballad of life spent together (((HUGS)))
Hi Barleygirl, I can understand that reasoning. All I can say is, these are not Vampire, they are th.. read moreHi Barleygirl, I can understand that reasoning. All I can say is, these are not Vampire, they are the ancient Vampyre and they love as any human does love. They have heart and soul. They were the first, God's Vengeance. They are two who have shared love eternal. Hugs always....Mike.
3 Years Ago
Thanks for explaining.
3 Years Ago
No problem. Have a wonderful weekend. Hugs always....Mike.
we have read many stories about Vampires, but what I like about yours that first it's a poetical series, second as I read this one specially what I feel is more about two old souls who shared many lives together not only a cliche story of Vampires, and this touches me more, this one I like the most of those about I read of your Vampyre series because it speaks everything, your rhythm again is so wonderful~ Hugs*
Posted 3 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
3 Years Ago
Hi Gounwah, thank you for dropping by and the wonderful review, it is much appreciated. The Vampyre .. read moreHi Gounwah, thank you for dropping by and the wonderful review, it is much appreciated. The Vampyre are the oldest of souls. I enjoy writing this series. Hugs....Mike.