A Dream.

A favourite place to walk in a dream of love.

Take me to your river of dream,
A more beautiful sight, my eyes have never seen,
By Its emerald green banks, we shall walk hand In hand
Our dream shall be forever, you do understand.

Not for one moment or not for one day,
We shall walk by dream's river, Love Is our way,
And ever In life, shall our dream be the same,
And when All Is done, Love shall always remain.

Let us walk by the river, Its beauty shall unfold,
In the water's reflection, your glory shall be told,
This Is our Love's vision, this river so serene,
As we walk by our river, In the midst of a dream.

Reviews

[barleygirl]

Most of my life, I lived & worked in population centers becuz that's where the jobs are. I had a vague dream about living in the wilderness, but I never planned it out or anything. It just happened at the right time & now ten years later, I'm still living my dream & even more than I could have dreamed. I feel the dream in your poem is the kind that just lolls around in one's heart until one day it finally unfolds to a person's delight (((HUGS)))

[shadrach hah]

Hi Barleygirl, thank you for dropping by and the review on this piece, it is much appreciated. It is good to hear that you are living your dream. Yes, this is a dream of the heart, whether it comes to fruition or not, it shall ever be the dream. Hugs always....Mike.

[JE Falcon]

"As we walk by our river, In the midst of a dream."
This is a great line, and the poem takes me to places I haven't been in a while. Thanks for the journey.

[shadrach hah]

Hi JE, thank for dropping by and the review on this piece, it is much appreciated. I was always happiest when I was walking by water. I remember the river in question but I can't for the life of me remember its name. I had to walk its emerald green banks again. Have a wonderful Thursday....Michael.

[Patricia]

so romantic and love the format, great rhyming and rhythm, I love dreamy poems. wonderful write! Keep 'em coming, HUGS!

[shadrach hah]

Hi Patricia, thank you for dropping by and the review on this piece, it is much appreciated. A dream that I wish could be real. The river in the dream seems very familiar to me. I also love dreamy poems. Have a wonderful evening. Hugs always....Mike.

[alanwgraham]

Great poem Shadrach. Your metaphor of the path of love works very well. Quite a few of my ideas for stories have come from dreams. By the way I live just a few miles away in Kingskettle the other side of Glenrothes.
Cheers,
Alan

[shadrach hah]

Hi Alan, fellow countryman. Thank you for dropping by and the review on this piece, it is much appreciated. Dreams of love shall ever fill my mind and keep my heart warm. Have a wonderful Wednesday. Hugs always....Mike.

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

Awww wow this is perfect
It’s like two souls dreaming the same dream meeting in the middle of it all at the riverbank
Loved it
I’ll sure to be back !
Well done

[shadrach hah]

Hi Julie, thank you for dropping by and the review, it is much appreciated. The river, the place where two souls meet to share their love. I always love that scene. Hugs....Mike.

[Miss Sharon]

(Not for one moment or not for one day, We shall walk by dream's river, Love Is our way,) Beeeeeeeeeeautiful! I love the rhyming couplets in this write. ~Sharon

[shadrach hah]

Hi Sharon, thank you for dropping by and the review on this piece, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you enjoyed my couplets. The dream is ever alive in my heart and the love forever flows. Maybe such a place exists in reality. Hugs always....Mike.

[lightsong]

"Take me to your river of dream" your opining line is the most I like, I find it cleverly and carefully done aside of its romantic meaning, a river always flow and what You mean that, it's how the Dream should be, always flowing, anytime and anywhere, your words flow with serene feelings of true romance.

[shadrach hah]

Hi lightsong, the dreams ever flow and the love flows with them. I shall ever let the heart sing. Thank you for dropping by with the review. Hugs....Mike.