blush of color

Haiku for spring

 

blush of color
nature stirs
after long sleep

 

Author's Note

What do you think?

Photo from google images
the first flush of spring

Reviews

[TM "Ree" Tate]

concisely expressive

[-abc-]

hourglass shaped ku. :) loved the tribute to spring, michael. cheers, tuni from AP.

[kevluvtory]

I am not a fan of this form of poetry to be honest... It always seems to lack something no matter how good the writer. It may just be my own preference and others possibly see more than I do.

[deedeekm]

love it :) Spring is my favorite time of year - I am always so glad to see the green return and things begin to bloom :)

[Maya Storm]

Short... Good... Short... But I get the point, it's spring. Did I mention how short it actually is? :)

[MysticMirage]

It's lovely; both your poem and the pretty picture. They go well together. Well done!

[Daytonight]

Lovely description of spring. Well done as usual. Keep up the great work.