How far am I?

Words so deep but never forgotten,

so far gone yet so close.

Unclear, but see through but not seen.

Big and seen yet so small and unheard.

So mighty, strong, brave but so weak inside.

Alone, sad, scared and calling out,

how much farther must I go?

Haven't I finished my journey,

passed the test, or accomplished my goal?

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Loved your write! Even though it is simple yet impactful. A person after self-introspection with no achievement will come across the same thought as explained by your lively words. If it's personal, I must say we are never born to be perfect but what we do today to make a perfect future is in our hand. Phrases are flowing like a river with lots of hindrances of rock yet reaching to destination. Encourage to write more and Glad to stop by reading your poem. Have a wonderful day ahead:)