And there we go up in smoke

Maybe i could ask

was it the way I dressed?

was it the way I walked?

did you really just need a rest from it all?

did you forget all those nights that we talked

underneath that willow tree

full of sad souls who lost their glow

I could ask what went wrong

how things got so messed up

how i ended up alone

You could blame me for the wrong that was done

you can say I was the reason we broke up

even though you knows thats wrong.

could you still look at yourself

the man who you are now

when all that you used to be

is shrivled up now

Do you see the fading light

of our love untouched

do you see the way i still love you

even when I hate ever ounce of what you are

maybe you can find the truth behind these lies

can you see once and for all

how much your despised?

Reviews

[Matthew Ryan Hardy]

Love the poem, some guys are like that. If they start disliking you they will leave and say its all your fault so it looks like they are the good guys in the whole ordeal. You will meet someone along the lines that won't do that to you

Matthew Hardy

[Andy]

aww, a lot of good points in there.