Something was said

Something was said

and all day long

it has made its place

in my head

I think about it

day

and night

it is killing me

devouring me

whole

i need to know

is it true

is it something new

something was said

and all day long

it has made a place

in my head

its made me stop

stop caring for you

the person who

i thought you were

is it true?

you were with your friends

right?

No

I won't listen

you couldn't have

your not

that person

but yet its the truth

it makes it's way up

to the roof

and lingers

the words that were said

are now hanging over my head

and the words that were said

is that you and her

were seen in bed

and that is all

that needed to be seen

to tell me

who you have always been

and who you will

always will be

 

Reviews

[sarah]

So sad but so full of raw emotion it hurts when the truth is finally out in the open it can suck! But great write!

[Patches I'm not so new..]

Love the poem love the way you presented it very well done

[Ecko]

Really like the shortness of each line...makes it cool :) The emotions expressed are crystal clear. Keep it upppp

[EvilAngel]

You have this way of writing that reminds me of old poetry. Like from a different century. You're really good and your poems are so emotional and touching. Great job!

[E.V. Black]

The horrible, painful truth that I have felt myself. I feel for you.