Field of Dead Wishes

I pass a field of dandelions,

such a beautiful sight, one may say.

But, I just turn my head and walk away.

What a beautiful field it may be to you,

but to me it’s a field of dead wishes that never will come true.

Reviews

[groisht]

The title alone would have been enough, but the rest is great too!

[Mia C.]

Haha, thank you! :)

[Tiffany Boles]

I love it. Short and sweet, good job!

[Mia C.]

Thank you so much!! I'm glad you love it. :)))

[Misery]

There is much going on in this short poem. It spans many years, from a child's wishes to an adult's remembrances and resentments. Well done, Mia C.

[Mia C.]

Thank you! :))