Butterfly

Butterfly

If I jumped from way up high

In the Big Blue Sky

Would you catch me like a Butterfly?

 

Even if my wings were made of bloody glass?

Or would you simply let me crash?

And scrape my shattered wings into the trash?

 

Would you stomp on me with an evil grin?

Or would you notice my chagrin

And help me learn to fly again?

Reviews

[K-mo]

I like this a lot, great piece!

[Mary Fioratti]

That is such a questioning poem... I love butterflies... and are we not always trying to fly? Fly out there guessing if someone would take us in their hands?
*Mary*

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what sweet sentiment..the analogy to a butterfly works well..lovely write

[Lonnie Paul Johnson]

I liked the message and the imagery are vivid oh yes I like the font too

[Sad Penguin]

I thought it was beautifully written.

Well thought out and filled with vivid imagery.
I think that is a thought we all have shared at some point in your lives.
I again commend you for sharing this and hope that this writing becomes persistent for you.

You're very talented.
Keep up the good work!

[Laura E. Aranda]

F A V O R I T E

[Break The Broken]

first... I LOVE THAT FONT!!! teehee, but seriously that was amazing and i can completely relate with the feeling hitting rock bottom and no one there to help you. it was so well written even though it was short. i loved it, its going in my favorites

[An owl on the moon]

A poignant pain... the heart that senses both beauty and fragility... wanting to know she is not alone, but loved and desired and cherished. Such a rich, deep write.

[Priscilla Sayers]

Definitely I would help you learn to fly again! Sweet write. I dig it!
Would never want a butterfly such as you to crash:)

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

what a wicked visual~ percolates in the imagination opening wider the possibilities of scenery~ love how you introduce its silk followed immediately by the crash and thunder of edgy edges~