I will be forgotten

1 out of 8 poems in Final Ray of Light Folder

There will be a time where I will be forgotten

Time I will close my eyes and don't care what will happen,

Time where all uncertainties will be forever gone

So please stop crying my only one.

Because this life gave me too much pain

Life where everything is pain and less gain,

This is the fight where I was destined to give up

Broken pieces of my heart I no longer need to pick up

Don't cry my love my life's not worthy of your tears

For I don't have any strength or courage to face my fears,

Don't cry my love my and your life is just temporary

Don't waste your tears over me and be happy.

Goodbye this time there'll be no "See you around"

I will be in a place where I'll be sleeping safe and sound,

Goodbye for I will be resting forever

Goodnight as forever turns to "Never".

Author's Note

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Reviews

[bluessadmood]

I really loved this..so strong words and sad thoughts..
But there was a feeling of all hopes gone.no one like me could get it that life was not so hard..it's always unfair and a real burden..but there was some negativity in this nothing is stronger than a man's will to thrive and get over everything he faces..or else ito not human..mam is precious and a gem.you just could not beat..once he stops to be I think he is not a man any more..
We just survived a war that it's still going on till this hour..once people gets there lives back they go on living like nothing ever happened..I think this is the way it should be ..there should be no place for despair here..always keep your heads up and say i am a winner
Nothing will gets me down..ever
Thank you for your words brought many thoughts
Lovely write..

[Coyote Poetry]

I lost two brothers to suicide and three brothers to drug overdose. They are never forgotten. Their voices and faces are missed.
"Goodbye this time there'll be no "See you around"
I will be in a place where I'll be sleeping safe and sound,
Goodbye for I will be resting forever
Goodnight as forever turns to "Never"."
The above lines sad and a scary place to be. People will remember and suffer. Today 30 years later after second brother committed suicide. I hold regret for not knowing. Thank you Joshie for sharing your words and thoughts. You made me think tonight.
Coyote