World Of Sorrow Part 2

The rest of the rap...

World Of Sorrow Part 2

Night becomes day, and day becomes night

As they hide in fear of the raging fight

Through the heartless bullets and fiery rain

Through sadness, sorrow and dark disdain

In a small cold cellar, they wait alone

Praying that their family all made it home

'Cause you like the war, you do, you do

'Cause all it brings are freaking profits for you

Paid with the blood of innocent ones

Sold with the lives that have been brought undone

As they watch their gardens, once beautiful, now gone

Surrounded in fire, driven from where they belonged

And you're just laughing it all away

Saying, "You'll just rebuild it all someday!"

But you're stupid, you're dumb, you never knew what it feels

Never knowing where or when you'll get your next meal

Never having to struggle just to make ends meet

Never having to watch the world from the side of the street

Ignorance is bliss, 'cause it's your middle name

Hypocrisy too is your own little game

Don't you realize how many people suffer out there?

But no you f*****g don't, 'cause you just don't care

So we don't want to hear your crap, your forsaken words

The broken promises that all of us have heard

Put your money where your mouth is, if you've got the guts

For all the people who still live in broken huts

For the ones you rendered just null and void

For the ones you just watched as they were destroyed

Another voice

Another soul

Lost in the bitter darkness

A world of sorrow

Another song

As it unfolds

Holds their prayers for happiness

For a better tomorrow

To you money's everything, profits all you see

And your f*****g attitude sickens you and me

You can't hide the blood on your hands anymore

Just watch as we start to kick down the freaking door

And watch as your world spirals, crashing down

You don't know you're falling till you hit the ground

Author's Note

Sorry if it's a little long...
And sorry if you found this harsh...

Reviews

[OT]

very nice!! I see why you sent me these ones haha echoes my rant! and very well said at that UD - very strong last stanza - sums it up very powerfully!! great poem!! great sentiments, and one's we should all take heed of!

[Marie Harrison]

Wow, I loved it. It's not too long at all.

[Ruth]

If we could all see the disaster through lies and manipulation then the world would be a better place! This is not too long, for me anyhow! It needs that!
A better tomorrow can arrive, if we all accept peace on many levels!
AWESOME work love, the time has never been more important and needful of change!
Control has to stop!
Love this!
xx

[AmeliaMae]

i like it a lot!

[HorrorMaster]

Very good I love it.

[Kasey Jones]

Powerful. The second stanza is my favorite. Again, flawless rhythm. You're great at writing raps. Keep it up.

[Senseless whatever]

Not long. A good followup to the first. This bites a little more and you let the focus grow which is cool. The first you look at individual plight, in this piece you go global. Great job!

[Signet]

Wow, another spellbinding poem!
I don't mind it being long because it's beautiful! :)
Keep writing!

[Haifa]

this is a powerful poem, I believe. Well done.

[A.Lee]

Wow... This is amazing. Very, very strong and very hard-hitting. I love the last verse/stanza. Excellent work.