Your Song Part 2

The next part of 'Your Song".

Your Song Part 2

Upon the dark moor, where sorrow lies

I found you right there, sadness in your eyes

So I brought you back, and we never looked back

Again, until right now

Serenity surrounds the darkened skies

In our secret place now, you and I

And I'll give anything to see you again

Back there again, somehow

And I know you're still so angry at all that I've done

And I'm just so sorry, nothing gained, nothing won

So listen to this, no matter where you may be

'Cause I need you, and someday I know you'll see

Think of all the happy days

When I'm just too far away

But I still see the sky in your eyes

And I'm sorry for all I've put you through

'Cause the reason this song was made is you

And I'm taking back all my twisted lies

And I'll hold you close as the skies turn ever blue

'Cause it's just me and you

Stay with me till forever

I'll hold you till the end

And I'll be there whenever

You need your best friend

'Cause I know I'm good at something

Don't think I'll ever find it now

So close your eyes, and drift away

We'll make it through somehow

Think of all the happy days

When I'm just too far away

But I still see the sky in your eyes

And I'm sorry for all I've put you through

'Cause the reason this song was made is you

And I'm taking back all my twisted lies

And I'll hold you close as the skies turn ever blue

'Cause it's just me and you

Author's Note

I don't really know how to say this, but I value each and every one of the reviews you guys give me. All I ask is that you give me a rating that fits your review...

Reviews

[trainwreck]

This whole poem was fantastic. Both parts worked together so well. I really enjoyed reading it. The structure, as always, was lovely.

[Early November]

Now that I've finished part 2, it kind of reminds of my Valentine's Special poem. You sir, have a gift in writing and I urge you to keep going.

[?]

Stay with me till forever
I'll hold you till the end
And I'll be there whenever

Great lines there.
love Part 1 and Part 2 What a beautiful song, so well written, heart felt

[Frantzuu]

Well written again. Since it's a well written poem, I'm sure it would make a beautiful song. Thanks for sharing bro. I enjoyed it.

[Charles]

OK, so I find a refrain in part !!. All's well that ends well. What about the 2nd stanza here, though. You've found this person and brought him/her back (see stanza 1), then in stanza 2, you's give anything to see him/her back there again. A bit confusing unless time-travel is involved. :-)

[KAREN]

Another well written write! Heart felt and great flow!

[FallenHeroXx]

This was just as good as the other one

Fallen

[HopelesslyDevoted]

this part really struck me:
Stay with me till forever
I'll hold you till the end
And I'll be there whenever
You need your best friend

you always come up with the most touching expressions of the heart

[Bubbles]

an excellent sequel.

[Ashley Myers]

i like the second one as much as i like the first one. youre a talented song writer!