Your Song Part 2

The next part of 'Your Song".

Your Song Part 2

Upon the dark moor, where sorrow lies

I found you right there, sadness in your eyes

So I brought you back, and we never looked back

Again, until right now

Serenity surrounds the darkened skies

In our secret place now, you and I

And I'll give anything to see you again

Back there again, somehow

And I know you're still so angry at all that I've done

And I'm just so sorry, nothing gained, nothing won

So listen to this, no matter where you may be

'Cause I need you, and someday I know you'll see

Think of all the happy days

When I'm just too far away

But I still see the sky in your eyes

And I'm sorry for all I've put you through

'Cause the reason this song was made is you

And I'm taking back all my twisted lies

And I'll hold you close as the skies turn ever blue

'Cause it's just me and you

Stay with me till forever

I'll hold you till the end

And I'll be there whenever

You need your best friend

'Cause I know I'm good at something

Don't think I'll ever find it now

So close your eyes, and drift away

We'll make it through somehow

Think of all the happy days

When I'm just too far away

But I still see the sky in your eyes

And I'm sorry for all I've put you through

'Cause the reason this song was made is you

And I'm taking back all my twisted lies

And I'll hold you close as the skies turn ever blue

'Cause it's just me and you

Author's Note

I don't really know how to say this, but I value each and every one of the reviews you guys give me. All I ask is that you give me a rating that fits your review...

Reviews

[Ice QueenJen]

A very beautiful writing, but I would lose some of the 'and' words. One or two is alright, but more than that is just to much even in a song. Would love to hear this put to music too.

p.s. sorry its taken so long to read too!

[HorrorMaster]

Really awesome

[PrincessZeldaWannabe]

Will do and as good as part one!

[Sweets]

THIS IS AWESOME, LIKE SERIOUSLY AWESOMEEEEEEE

[.shalynn.009.]

Is this a completely different song, or just a continuation of part one? I was curious how you made a different tune for the same chorus. But I liked this one as well. I'd be curious to hear both, just to know what they actually sound like. Without that, it's really hard to get an accurate rating. As it is, I rarely rate because I find it so hard to give an accurate one. I hate rating. I feel it kind of can't take in both the good and bad parts of a piece, and it definitely doesn't get across the complicated meanings and ideas. It jsut...simplifies a piece way too much. But I'll try to boil it down to a number, though it may not be accurate for a song I can't hear. Good write, though, just based on reading it.

[Sarusai Hiryu]

A very reasonable request ...
Good job.

[Angela Mulley]

This is great work, and a fantastic second part to the song. Well written!

[Linear]

I rarely rate, but just for you I shall give you 92 Both poems were heartfelt, well written my friend

[Marie Harrison]

So romantic!

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Good work..!!!