Your Song Part 1

A song/poem dedicated to all who reads this...

Your Song Part 1

Place the pen down, write in the darkest ink

Trying to concentrate, but I just can't think

About what to do and how to say sorry

So I wrote this one for you

When the night falls, I watch the distant stars

Hope they'll guide me to wherever you are

'Cause I've been gone, it's been so long

But I swear I'll always stay true

'Cause I know you won't forgive me

For all that I've done

You know I'm not the same

And also what I've become

So listen to this, wherever you may be

Like how we watched the sunsets, you and me

Think of all the happy days

When I'm just too far away

But I still see the sky in your eyes

And I'm sorry for all I've put you through

'Cause the reason this song was made is you

And I'm taking back all my twisted lies

And I'll hold you close as the skies turn ever blue

'Cause it's just me and you

Reviews

[Cynthia]

So sweet and beautfiful, the whole description of the whole poem is truly great! I look forward to the next part of this poem, its WONDERFUL!
The wordings of the poem is beautiful......

[A]

Very romantic and heart-felt, one can feel how sincere you while reading your words, beautifully written.

[sarah]

Great job!

[Drake]

good job!

reminds me of one of my favorite Linkin Park songs.
don't dwell on what went wrong, remember the good, "Leave out all the rest".

[Coyote Poetry]

Sometime we have but good memories. Rarely in a life are we allowed a second chance. The poem is very good. You told a very good story. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Ruth]

An apology of intensity love
A really emotive poem that resonates
Awesome wording
xx

[THE LOST ROSE]

Lovely write very romantic! Word play was fantastic. This poem is one of the few I read that is not very visual. I think thats an art form itself! Thanks for creating and sharing.