Your Song Part 1

A song/poem dedicated to all who reads this...

Your Song Part 1

Place the pen down, write in the darkest ink

Trying to concentrate, but I just can't think

About what to do and how to say sorry

So I wrote this one for you

When the night falls, I watch the distant stars

Hope they'll guide me to wherever you are

'Cause I've been gone, it's been so long

But I swear I'll always stay true

'Cause I know you won't forgive me

For all that I've done

You know I'm not the same

And also what I've become

So listen to this, wherever you may be

Like how we watched the sunsets, you and me

Think of all the happy days

When I'm just too far away

But I still see the sky in your eyes

And I'm sorry for all I've put you through

'Cause the reason this song was made is you

And I'm taking back all my twisted lies

And I'll hold you close as the skies turn ever blue

'Cause it's just me and you

Reviews

[Frantzuu]

I'd be nice to hear a version of it. It's a beautifully written poem.

[Charles]

A well done confessional poem - apologizing for bad behavior. Would make good song lyrics with a refrain.

[KAREN]

Beautiful write! And very emotional, well expressed!!

[OT]

a very emotive piece of writing - your emotions come through in this one - and it is relatable so many!! brilliant writing as always UD! nice!

[FallenHeroXx]

Awesome and heart warming poetry :D

Fallen

[HopelesslyDevoted]

yep i can totally relate to this, especially the first part
Place the pen down, write in the darkest ink
Trying to concentrate, but I just can't think
About what to do and how to say sorry
So I wrote this one for you

[Kelsie Eileen Stark]

Your emotions show greatly in this...beautiful.

[Bubbles]

you are such a sweat heart, your feelings show so clearly through this poem, its beautiful.

[Ashley Myers]

i feel this way aboutmy ex. is that normal? lol. at the time i thought he was to blame for us splitting up butsince ive stepped out of the box i see things in a whole new light. and theres times i could take it all back. hes forgiven me but things will never be the same

[Shardbearer99]

That was a fantastic first part to this poem. I agree with Phaylen's comment about the Linkin Park comment. It does have that kind of feeling to it - it was very good and enjoyable to read. Great work