Somewhere In Your Eyes

I've realised where true solace lies...and this is a song/poem about that

Somewhere In Your Eyes

Searching, endlessly

For the one who's coming for me

And the world is closing in 

All around

Solace, to a broken heart

The smile on your face, right back at the start

Takes me back, to better times

Hear the sound

Hold you close as the skies turn ever blue

Know that tears fill my eyes as I think of you

And the scent of your hair

Still lingers in the wind

Somewhere in your eyes

I see the stars as they twinkle so bright

In the night sky of my mind

Crystal clear till forever

And at the sunrise

You'll be there as I hold you so tight

Somewhere just we can find

Holding on till forever

And I'll know always where my heaven truly lies

Somewhere deep inside your eyes

Broken, sorrowful

From the ruins, I stumble and fall

Once again, the world is all

Against me

Falling, to my knees again

But your arms hold me, healing my pain

You're the one who I really need

So save me

Feel your heart as the skies turn ever red

The color of the roses that nestle by your bed

Take me back to 

My better days, my heroine

Somewhere in your eyes

I see the stars as they twinkle so bright

In the night sky of my mind

Crystal clear till forever

And at the sunrise

You'll be there as I hold you so tight

Somewhere just we can find

Holding on till forever

And I'll know always where my heaven truly lies

Somewhere deep inside your eyes

Let the rain fall so soft

As I kiss you

Just know not a second goes by

Without me missing you

Forgive me, I'm never perfect

All I need is you

And I know where my heaven lies

It's here, somewhere in your eyes

Reviews

[Laura Yida <3]

this is adorable!

[Simple_mee]

:) Great write ... Just needs some good music now :)

[Chassitie Linnaea Nicol..]

love it

[Charles]

Good lyrics for your song.. At one point I could hear the guitar. :-)

[Hippy]

i liked it man it was huge and very sweet

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

Having read other reviews: I guess I'm going to have to be the bad guy.lol

I enjoy your writings, but some of your pieces that are brilliant still lack a small thing in my opinion. In many of your works you make a very conscious effort to make it known what inspired your writing by making lyrics to your favorite songs part of the story.

IMO making the works of another person the centerpiece of your own, kept you from progressing to the next level as a writer. I like the composition of that style, but I honestly don't believe that it improves the quality of your work. It almost felt like you gave credit where it is not due. You have a natural ability that can NOT be taught. It is a gift. No matter what triggers your inspiration to write...You seem to surpass it. Regardless of those opinions, it will never effect how I rate your work. I look at in regards to how you use your strengths as a writer. Period.

One thing I like about this poem is that it is full of genuine emotion. One of your strengths as a writer is your ability to connect with the reader and have them step into your feelings. I believe this song writing ability of yours could create a performer that bonds with the audience no matter how simple the lyrics could be. Your writings seem to have the driving force that made the Grunge era what it was.

My favorite thing about this poem is that you own it. It's exciting to see your work stand on its own. The imagery is marvelous. Once again you have created this emotional haven for us to step into. Great work here!

Having read many of your works..Id have to give you all 100 plus 2.

[Jaded rose]

Beautiful poem and powerful.

[Coyote Poetry]

The poem is very beautiful. Moved like a sweet song of love. In the mist of a true love. Only peace we can feel is to look into their eyes and wish for great dreams and journeys together. A outstanding poem of love and emotion.
Coyote

[A.Lee]

Beautiful work! (as usual) I love the feel of this poem. What a beautiful tribute to someone you love. I also love the way the feeling changed when you threw in these lines:
"Broken, sorrowful
From the ruins, I stumble and fall
Once again, the world is all
Against me

Falling, to my knees again
But your arms hold me, healing my pain
You're the one who I really need
So save me"

And then it changes back when the chorus comes back in. Excellent write. You created a lot of feeling in this one.

[zombiikillah666]

awwwwwwwwwwh.
yea.......i get this one. right hurrr.
and again...love stinks. grrrrr.

*smashes something off desk*

but i like this...its long and sweet.
flows and is fun to read, well not
like whoo hoo im having fun with

your misery, but like, i enjoy it,

cause its written nice..ya know? lol... yay !!!!! (: