Somewhere In Your Eyes

I've realised where true solace lies...and this is a song/poem about that

Somewhere In Your Eyes

Searching, endlessly

For the one who's coming for me

And the world is closing in 

All around

Solace, to a broken heart

The smile on your face, right back at the start

Takes me back, to better times

Hear the sound

Hold you close as the skies turn ever blue

Know that tears fill my eyes as I think of you

And the scent of your hair

Still lingers in the wind

Somewhere in your eyes

I see the stars as they twinkle so bright

In the night sky of my mind

Crystal clear till forever

And at the sunrise

You'll be there as I hold you so tight

Somewhere just we can find

Holding on till forever

And I'll know always where my heaven truly lies

Somewhere deep inside your eyes

Broken, sorrowful

From the ruins, I stumble and fall

Once again, the world is all

Against me

Falling, to my knees again

But your arms hold me, healing my pain

You're the one who I really need

So save me

Feel your heart as the skies turn ever red

The color of the roses that nestle by your bed

Take me back to 

My better days, my heroine

Somewhere in your eyes

I see the stars as they twinkle so bright

In the night sky of my mind

Crystal clear till forever

And at the sunrise

You'll be there as I hold you so tight

Somewhere just we can find

Holding on till forever

And I'll know always where my heaven truly lies

Somewhere deep inside your eyes

Let the rain fall so soft

As I kiss you

Just know not a second goes by

Without me missing you

Forgive me, I'm never perfect

All I need is you

And I know where my heaven lies

It's here, somewhere in your eyes

Reviews

[JENY]

Wow…
Wonderful..
Touching…
Excellent work…
After reading this poem…
Somewhere in my heart…
There came a feeble longing…
For the presence of my beloved….

[al25]

This is really good. Great job.

[Drake]

Beautiful..

[Anxelin]

wow this was so beautiful I loved this so much I felt pulled into those eyes too...

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

beautiful in its sincerety~ lush in its heartfelt composition~

[Taylor H.]

very powerful. I really didnt know what to expect when I read this but it was really good. Great job!

[WriterSki7]

Heh heh, did you now?
In spite of the fact you might have found love (who can say what love is these days?) this poem is a very rich one. It is riddled with emotion; but never mistake emotion for good work. Believe me, a poem can inspire emotion but still (for lack of a better word) suck a*s. Thankfully, yours does not do that. Good job.

[Holly]

the fourth paragraph begins the interruption of flow and starts a new one but overall you can hear you style and it's mostly smooth.

[GunMetal]

This is probably one of my favorites by you =)

[ghost writer]

that's what i feel hey let's write some music 4 this!