Hope In The Smallest Things

My rap about how hope is always there...no matter what the situation

Hope In The Smallest Things

The world is so dull, the skies are so gray

As we go about our boring lives everyday

We all hate our lives, but what can we do?

Where on earth can we find a sky so blue?

Abused by bosses, parents, teachers, the world,

The walls are closing in, thoughts just a swirl

Waiting for dreams that just don't come true
Wishing there was someone else like you

To commiserate, talk, something for the pain

Just a placebo for all the disdain

You walk, the gray streets falling all around

The rain is pouring, splashing on the ground

"At least my umbrella works," you think to yourself,

But over in the distance you see someone else

She's soaked to the skin, caught out all alone

Running really fast just to get back home

But you give her shelter, she smiles at you,

And you feel your heart lighten, and you smile too. 

With the little things that we do everyday

Don't listen to them who think that hope's gone away. 

It's right in front of you, and whatever you do, 

Hope's in all the smallest things, you know that's true.

All the small things that we do everyday

Bring back the colour to our world so gray

Author's Note

I just wrote this as I went along, with all my random thoughts...

Reviews

[Drake]

nice

[Senseless whatever]

Great write. Good visuals and an upbeat feeling.

[Sunflower/Sara Kendrick]

Great thoughts ...random thoughts that you were having when you composed this one...Keep the creative pen flowing....Thought that you would like to know that I am a grandmother however associating with young minds keeps one younger..Sunflower

[The_Dreamer]

Nice! I don't quite know how to understand poems, but this is creative!

[A.Lee]

this is really nice! it was very smooth and easy to read. i liked the images you portrayed. nicely done.

[Simple_mee]

An awesome write. The flow was quite smooth n the ending very subtle. A b'ful msg u've tried to give out thru this one. "Hope" an undying virtue which keeps us all going !! :)

[Aimee Mahathy]

This is just wonderful! It flowed nicely and the rhyme was effortless~
I love the message here!
Great job~

[Tracie Skarbo]

Oh I love this!! Such warmth and hope in its lines... you are so wise to view the world like this! I am glad to know that you are able to see rainbows in the rain! :)

[WriterSki7]

Very much another poem by Undying Glory. I'm afriad I'm getting used to your work; I can almost predict the words before I read them.

Good work; very much inside your area of expertise.

[Flo]

Abused by bosses, parents, teachers, the world,
The walls are closing in, thoughts just a swirl
Waiting for dreams that just don't come true
Wishing there was someone else like you

my favorite stanza, expressed very well, I enjoyed how you discribed it lightly yet in detail. as it was said before, hopeful, inspiring and also ery gifted piece.


I certainly loved this pome :) keep up the good work!
-Flo