The C.O.N.D.E.M.N.E.D

An acrostic poem based on all the bad choices in my life...

The C.O.N.D.E.M.N.E.D

Can't forget all the bad times, all stuck in my mind.

On my shoulders I bear the weight of my lies all this time.

No forgiveness for me, for all that I've done,

Devoured by myself, by the monster I've become. 

Endured so much, but gained nothing at all.

My rope has snapped now, and down I fall.

Now my world is finished, and I'm all alone.

Enter the darkness now, all the light is gone.

Deceit, lies, should never have been my path

But now I'm condemned, and they're now all I have.

Reviews

[Drake]

nice

[Sunflower/Sara Kendrick]

Great acrostic from the word Condemned....Lies only lead us into a pathway of more lies...Keep the creative pen flowing...Thanks so much for the kind review of my work...Sunflower

[Coyote Poetry]

Sometime we feel we reached a dead end. A small shine of light will lead us out. I like the feel in the poem. Description and the story was strong. Being condemn is just another lesson in a life to teach us to be wiser. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[MissWordSmith]

freaking awesome writing here! Really was blown away by this piece!

[Holly-Marie]

Very powerful. I love the last two lines they really drove the meaning of your poem home. Clever and effective. Really well written =)

[WriterSki7]

Very true. Very true indeed. Practice anything enough and you get good; even if you don't want to be good at it.

[Liv]

Wow.. I really enjoyed reading this.. My favorite lines are:

"Deceit, lies, should never have been my path.
But now I'm condemned, and they're all I have."

Very well written. :)