The U.N.F.O.R.G.I.V.E.N. 2

A acrostic poem inspired by Metallica's song "The Unforgiven II". Note the references to the song in the poem. Hope you like it!

The U.N.F.O.R.G.I.V.E.N.2

Under the wicked skies you lie with me. 

Nothing left of the sun, nothing left to see. 

Forever wondering if you loved me too. 

Or whether you're like me, you're unforgiven too.

Reading the book of my life that you hold, 

Going page by page, but nothing left to show. 

I stand alone, as I've always done for so long. 

Vulnerable, helpless, wishing you'll be there when I'm gone. 

Embedding this key deep down in you. 

Now you're like me, you're unforgiven too.

2day the world's dark, clouded by what I've done. 

 

 

Author's Note

Image taken from Wikipedia

Reviews

[Katrina Mckeown]

wow brilliant.

[Huggy Bear]

fantastic piece:)

[Sarusai Hiryu]

The sequel is even better.

[Sarah McConnaughey]

My favorite part:

"Under the wicked skies you lie with me.
Nothing left of the sun, nothing left to see.
Forever wondering if you loved me too."

I like this is poem a lot. Amazing.

[CompellingComposer]

Once again, you have impressed me. An amazing job. Keep it up!

[T. J. Blackburn]

Nice. Like it better than the first. Like how you integrate "2" into it.

[HorrorMaster]

Love the song but this was great. METAL!!!

[PrincessZeldaWannabe]

Even better then the last one!

[trainwreck]

Wow. I liked the first installment and this is much better. I loved it. Great job.

[Linear]

you're good at this, really great work