I'll Be There Part 2

The rest of my song/poem about someone with a life-threatening illness. Hope you like it!

 I’ll Be There Part 2

I could only watch then

As your life turned upside down

And would never ever be the same again

 

And right from the start now

We never thought things would go so wrong

But I’m always gonna be your friend

 

And we don’t care what they say

When they laugh at me and you

Don’t feel like you’re so helpless

Pray to God that you’ll pull through

 

And whenever you feel sad

I’ll be there by your side

Think of all the good times we had

We’ll make it through even the darkest nights

 

As you sleep

See the stars shining bright

Don’t ever give up the fight

Don’t be afraid

Though it’s so far away

I still feel your pain

And I wish I could take your pain away

And don’t worry ‘cos I’ll always stay

 

Hold on with me

Don’t ever think it’s all too late

I wish I could change

Change this moment in your fate

But all that matters now is that you make it through

 

As you sleep

See the stars shining bright

Don’t ever give up the fight

Don’t be afraid

Though it’s so far away

I still feel your pain

And I wish I could take your pain away

And don’t worry ‘cos I’ll always stay

 

Reviews

[Theresa]

I started tearing up when I was reading this. It's terribly sad, but the way you wrote it made it uplifting. The lines:
"As you sleep
See the stars shining bright
Don't ever give up the fight
Don't be afraid"
these words are so encouraging and beautiful. I love how you refer to the stars, its just such a great piece. Nicely done.

[Hippy]

i like them both and what i have noticed if you take 2 simalar peices then add them together they usually end up bad a*s i thik you shou;ld try that here

[A.Lee]

As you sleep
See the stars shining bright
Don’t ever give up the fight
Don’t be afraid
Though it’s so far away
I still feel your pain
And I wish I could take your pain away
And don’t worry ‘cos I’ll always stay

Beautiful... I was on the verge of tears with the first one and this one coaxed them out. Very well done. Great job.

[lizzy]

life is too far away i maight die if i don't reach it. how lif is it stays but it sucks.