I'll Be There Part 1

Song/Poem about someone suffering from a life-threatening illness. Couldn't help thinking of Simple Plan's "Save You". Hope you like it!

I’ll Be There Part 1

 

I can only imagine

What you’re going through right now

And you smile so I don’t see the pain inside

 

And right from the beginning

You never let them bring you down

And I’ll be there, so all these feelings

You don’t ever need to hide

 

And don’t you ever think that

You’re in this all alone

‘Cos I’ll be there, when no one cares

When all your hope is gone

 

And when you think the road’s so bleak

That your life’s going nowhere

Just close your eyes and think of me

Remember that I’ll be there

I’ll be there

 

As you sleep

See the stars shining bright

Don’t ever give up the fight

Don’t be afraid

Though it’s so far away

I still feel your pain

And I wish I could take all your pain away

And don’t worry ‘cos I’ll always stay

Reviews

[rockinmiley555]

i think this works better as a song than a poem. it really explains the situation clearly in a simple way :) well done

[Moalix]

It was a beautiful poem and I think I liked it all the more because I am going through a bad time. Excellent work yet again. :)

[Senseless whatever]

Beautiful poem. The piece flows nicely and is full of feeling. My only suggestion would be to tweak the last three lines. 'pian' and 'pain' next to each other kinda make it stagger.

[Hippy]

its nice to know your there for hte person but i have trouble pictureing what music would go to it

[A.Lee]

This is really beautiful and very well written. It brought tears to my eyes. And I've been listening to "Save You" for a while. It pretty much sums up my feelings at this point-- mine and my husbands both. Well done.

[T.S. Rex]

This is wonderful, and gave me butterflies in my tummy! There must be a very special someone in your life =]