After The Storm

A song/poem about deep obsession about someone. Enjoy!

After The Storm

 

Inspiration can’t be found

As I sit up and think about

What I was going to write

To tell you

 

Lost all my pretence

Now I’m coming clean

About everything then and now

And in between

And whatever I was just too shy before

To tell you

 

If only you could see what you’ve done to me

Just made me so crazy for you, and

I’m just feeling so weak in the knees

And all I can think about is you

 

When you smile at me

It feels like I could do anything

When I hear you laugh

It feels like the sun is

Shining down on me after the storm

And how I dream of you

When I’m feeling lost for too long

And after the storm passes on

 

Can’t keep staying here

When you’re just too far away

And how can I stop myself

From remembering you now

 

Can’t keep the distance near

As I watch the old red ribbon fray

The one which tied my picture and yours

Together, up till now

 

If only you realised how much you mean to me

You’re so addictive, it’s true

Just dreaming of the day you knock on my door

And say what I never dared say to you

 

When you smile at me

It feels like I could do anything

When I hear you laugh

It feels like the sun is

Shining down on me after the storm

And how I dream of you

When I’m feeling lost for too long

And after the storm passes on

 

Well I’ve said all I have to

My confession is done

Do you still need me now?

 

When you smile at me

It feels like I could do anything

When I hear you laugh

It feels like the sun is

Shining down on me after the storm

And how I dream of you

When I’m feeling lost for too long

And after the storm passes on

 

Reviews

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

tender sentiments woven beautifully ~ dazzing descriptives lovingly created~ much enjoyed the read~ =)~

[Matthew Ian Herrawood W]

this poem reminds me of My self and my GF. I feel i have to apolagise for every little thing even if it doesnt need me to say sorry i do. love doees that to ya though. good poem flowes well.

[Flo]

This is such a lovely poem, the flow, the confession, the somehow yearning of the loved one, I admit, one of these rare favorites that just give it up to the heart, good job on this one, loved it
Keep up the good write!
:D
-Flo

[THE LOST ROSE]

I like your confession style in the poem. the flow is flawless and the repeat phrases are polished. Spoken word style this would be great to hear performed. If it is just a poem that people will read one day in your book I would lose the last stanza. Great poem!