After The Storm

A song/poem about deep obsession about someone. Enjoy!

After The Storm

 

Inspiration can’t be found

As I sit up and think about

What I was going to write

To tell you

 

Lost all my pretence

Now I’m coming clean

About everything then and now

And in between

And whatever I was just too shy before

To tell you

 

If only you could see what you’ve done to me

Just made me so crazy for you, and

I’m just feeling so weak in the knees

And all I can think about is you

 

When you smile at me

It feels like I could do anything

When I hear you laugh

It feels like the sun is

Shining down on me after the storm

And how I dream of you

When I’m feeling lost for too long

And after the storm passes on

 

Can’t keep staying here

When you’re just too far away

And how can I stop myself

From remembering you now

 

Can’t keep the distance near

As I watch the old red ribbon fray

The one which tied my picture and yours

Together, up till now

 

If only you realised how much you mean to me

You’re so addictive, it’s true

Just dreaming of the day you knock on my door

And say what I never dared say to you

 

When you smile at me

It feels like I could do anything

When I hear you laugh

It feels like the sun is

Shining down on me after the storm

And how I dream of you

When I’m feeling lost for too long

And after the storm passes on

 

Well I’ve said all I have to

My confession is done

Do you still need me now?

 

When you smile at me

It feels like I could do anything

When I hear you laugh

It feels like the sun is

Shining down on me after the storm

And how I dream of you

When I’m feeling lost for too long

And after the storm passes on

 

Reviews

[JENY]

Wow a beautiful song….
Enjoyed it….
Not too hard…not too simple…
Only beautiful…..

[Kasey Jones]

You capture the feelings of someone in love perfectly. This is my favorite stanza:

"When you smile at me
It feels like I could do anything
When I hear you laugh
It feels like the sun is
Shining down on me after the storm
And how I dream of you
When I’m feeling lost for too long
And after the storm passes on"

Very nice poem! :)

[HorrorMaster]

Very nice poem

[Haifa]

Very nice poem and beautiful, I like it. Thanks for sharing and keep writing. Really well done ^_^ .

[Signet]

I like the poem, really! True love is indeed beautiful, so difficult to let go of.
"When I hear you laugh
It feels like the sun is
Shining down on me after the storm" - Those are the lines that I found the most beautiful.
Keep writing.

[Coyote Poetry]

Your words are true. The great storm is time and healing. Easy to write about. Very hard to do and accomplish. The poem story was sad and strong. To overcome pain and become friends is a great task. I like the feel and the ending. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Randolf Ramos]

True love! ahh so true that it gives an exhilarating feeling to everyone experiencing it.

[A.Lee]

This is excellent. I love the imagery and the way you described how this obsession really feels. How essential it is to him. Great work.

[Natalie]

This was great. I could feel the strong obssesion this person had, like dreaming about this someone is the only thing that's keeping him/her alive. I really liked the imagery in the stanzas where it goes "When you smile at me..." Once again, wonderful job :D

[Ruth]

Wow!
Thats an obsession alright lol
Awesome work love!
I adore your metaphors, they have a power of their own!
Wonderful work
xx