After The Storm

A song/poem about deep obsession about someone. Enjoy!

After The Storm

 

Inspiration can’t be found

As I sit up and think about

What I was going to write

To tell you

 

Lost all my pretence

Now I’m coming clean

About everything then and now

And in between

And whatever I was just too shy before

To tell you

 

If only you could see what you’ve done to me

Just made me so crazy for you, and

I’m just feeling so weak in the knees

And all I can think about is you

 

When you smile at me

It feels like I could do anything

When I hear you laugh

It feels like the sun is

Shining down on me after the storm

And how I dream of you

When I’m feeling lost for too long

And after the storm passes on

 

Can’t keep staying here

When you’re just too far away

And how can I stop myself

From remembering you now

 

Can’t keep the distance near

As I watch the old red ribbon fray

The one which tied my picture and yours

Together, up till now

 

If only you realised how much you mean to me

You’re so addictive, it’s true

Just dreaming of the day you knock on my door

And say what I never dared say to you

 

When you smile at me

It feels like I could do anything

When I hear you laugh

It feels like the sun is

Shining down on me after the storm

And how I dream of you

When I’m feeling lost for too long

And after the storm passes on

 

Well I’ve said all I have to

My confession is done

Do you still need me now?

 

When you smile at me

It feels like I could do anything

When I hear you laugh

It feels like the sun is

Shining down on me after the storm

And how I dream of you

When I’m feeling lost for too long

And after the storm passes on

 

Reviews

[MuSe Ampoule]

Beautiful, almost lyrical.

[KAREN]

Beautiful! A poem that speaks from the heart! Excellent write!!

[Valentine]

Nature can really inspire that writer to fream impossible dreams or live out the fantasies in ones life..lol and God bless.Valentine

[Huggy Bear]

fantastic piece:)

[T. J. Blackburn]

Inspiration can’t be found
As I sit up and think about
What I was going to write
To tell you

[OT]

very nice UD!! you have strong descriptions as always!! and profound meanings hidden under the layers! flows well - subtle rhyme scheme going on letting it come along hum-like almost - (just seen it said song haha) well it's a great soem? I don't know whatever the mix is haha!! great stuff!!!!

favourite lines:

"Can’t keep the distance near
As I watch the old red ribbon fray
The one which tied my picture and yours
Together, up till now"

[HopelesslyDevoted]

nice! i can totally relate!
love the line:
If only you realised how much you mean to me
You’re so addictive, it’s true
Just dreaming of the day you knock on my door
And say what I never dared say to you

[Kaitlyn]

Great Job! :)

[thatscenechikkmarie(:]

Great write! sounds like a good flowing song. and i love how you describe, and ask questions. overall great(:

[Linear]

Nicely worded song/poem, I wrote songs when I was much younger, that talent seems to have left me long ago, reading this work brought that back to me, though I was never all that good, thank you