Frozen Light

My first song lyrics/poem in an INCREDIBLY long time haha. Hopefully this was worth the wait...

Frozen Light

Glistening blaze
Paint the light in all your color
A sparkle inset
In the depths of your heart

With each passing day
Embrace my world in all your wonder
Pain and regret
Fade away into the dark

Through days and nights you shine so bright
In memories of frozen light
Facets carved and scars on souls
But I hope it's you I'll always hold

Thoughts crystallize in cold and rain
Reflections hide your deepest pain
Dispersing into joys and smiles above
Into a day

When we know
That happiness
Should never be our greatest test
Pages fold
Yet never fade
An epic waiting to be made
This is real
And you're here tonight
Underneath skies of dark azurite
Beyond my heart and mind is where you'll stay
Love knows no end or fray


Lost in the night
Yet radiance in all directions
The words of the past
Call forever in your mind

Follow in spite
Of those who find your imperfections
And words never last
Against the passing of time

Hard as rock or paper thin
My heart will always let you in
So don't turn away when I say
That I'll stay with you indefinitely

Crowned in pain and all you've been
Becoming the one to whom I sing
Mirroring the first rays of the sun
And they'll bring a day

When we know
That happiness
Should never be our greatest test
Pages fold
Yet never fade
An epic waiting to be made
This is real
And you're here tonight
Underneath skies of dark azurite
Beyond my heart and mind is where you'll stay
Love knows no end or fray

And when I'll open up my eyes
And we'll discover more inside
Let the seconds flow by
As we'll find new heights to climb

And when you'll smile towards the sky
Together we'll walk on side by side
As we share our lives we'll find
All the joy we've left behind

When we know
That happiness
Should never be our greatest test
Pages fold
Yet never fade
An epic waiting to be made
This is real
And you're here tonight
Underneath skies of dark azurite
Beyond my heart and mind is where you'll stay
Love knows no end or fray

Reviews

[Rikkevi Rue]

thoughts swirl with emotions, fragmented images of experience seasoning on a feast of those stark sentiments, sensation so strong that it borders on pain, yet the pain is laced with ecstasy. Yet each conceptual morsel is couched in the terms of nature, frozen like the ice crystalline images that are frozen in the mind, potent enough to evoke the still tender raw remembrance of the moment.

Your writing invades the readers world on multiple levels simultaneously, like the tiger that stalks oh so stealthily while the force potential in its loins is yet trembling visibly below its coat, waiting for the precise moment to explode into a fury of assault. It is the potentiality of it that I admire, the feeling like the power a storm front holds behind it, a palpable energy that is sensed yet not yet manifest. At like the storm, up above there is a whole world of beauty and light that floats serenely unseen.

I often say that art is the employment of enough technique to bring about creation of an emotional impact. It is not the mechanics of it so much as the impelling carrier wave of thought and emotion that telepaths to the reader. Very nice and I look forward to reviewing more of your excellent pieces.

[Haifa]

It's a really beautiful poem, so deep so honest, I love it! :) well done

[Katrina Mckeown]

Very well penned. ...an interestingly descriptive and exciting read..Thank -you for sharing ☺

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

There are a lot of emotions here and almost too many sights and sounds to count.
This poem contains a wealth of experience.

[Valentine]

A very nice write. There are so many lines that hit my heart, I cannot express them all. Thank you for sharing this. Valentine

[Coyote Poetry]

Good words and story in your poem.
"An epic waiting to be made
This is real
And you're here tonight
Underneath skies of dark azurite
Beyond my heart and mind is where you'll stay
Love knows no end or fray "
I like how you led to the above ending. Your good description create struggle and places. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry. Always a pleasure to read your words.
Coyote