Finally See

Finally See

A Poem by MusicJunkie
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I need to take a break from trying to find love. It doesn't work and one guy showed me that.

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I am done with love

And I'm done with trust

Hard as it may be

This is a must

 

The tears are streaming now

The anger has reason

I am sick and tired of

How you act like little children

 

All of your harsh words

How you loved to ignore me

It really opened my eyes

And now I can finally see

 

I'm sorry I defended you

I'm sorry that I changed

Now that I am done with you

The real me will stay the same

 

I am done with love

And I'm done with trust

I can finally see

That this is a must

 

© 2012 MusicJunkie


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It's a nice poem, but according to your description not entirely accurate. You said, "I need to take a break from trying to find love", but in the poem you said, "I am done with love."

It's beautifully written though.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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I"ve said the same before myself. Many times :)

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MusicJunkie
MusicJunkie

Kansas City, MO



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Im a normal teenage girl. Boy crazy and addicted to music. I absolutely love Allstar Weekend, along with a few other bands lol. Chocolate is always a nice addition to life too. I have found that my on.. more..

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