I'm Sorry

I was rude to a guy and can't get over it.

I said I was sorry

You said it was fine

I still can't help feeling

I crossed the line

 

It wasn't real nice

In fact kinda rude

I'm sorry okay

I didn't mean to be crude

 

Please say it's over

That all is forgiven

I don't deserve it

But my heart is open

 

I don't say it a lot

So please know it's true

I'm so very sorry

If I hurt you

Reviews

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

This is really good. Nice flow and you poured your heart out to the guy and it's very sincere. I can relate to this a lot. I have done things in the past, and look back wanting to go to that person and say sorry a dozen times. Sometimes I hold back from doing it, but it's the right thing to do. If they don't accept the apology you can't say you didn't do your part and apologizing. It's never too late to apologize. Again this is great :)

Ashley Rivers--Dream BIG and you'll win BIG:)

[Opposum]

dang reading these other responses I wanna write like a half hour long thing but yeah I can relate wont say too much cause they could be watching :I but yeah sweet poem it had a nice flow and the rhyme and variety of words was awesome

[Chris]

Sometimes its too easy to say "I'm sorry" and the other doubts you mean it. Sometimes we really don't mean it because we didn't really care when we lashed out... we just NEEDED to hurt a n y t h i n g we could. its a fine line we walk trying to be a real person instead of a caricature of one.

Its too easy to hurt a person that's already unsure and hurting all on thier own. Ya know?

[Silver Of Hope]

This is very ture to the heart....I like it!