Love sucks

Love sucks

A Poem by MusicJunkie
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Just saw a Facebook post and now I feel like crap. This is total raw emotion so enjoy.

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Love really sucks

I thought you were the one

Then I saw her post it

Now the pain's begun

 

I don't what it means

Maybe I misunderstood

The truth is the one thing

That needs to be heard

 

My world's falling apart

The walls are caving in

I'm waiting for the day

That I win

 

Love really sucks

The pain I can't stand

When will I smile?

Maybe never again

© 2012 MusicJunkie


Author's Note

MusicJunkie
Sorry the last stanza doesnt really rhyme

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Rhyme can be implied at times ...the mind will hear what it wants to. Strange how this comment mirrors life - we tend to hear what we want to hear and not what we don't.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

that's why i never wanna fall in love....bcuz i dunno if i can stand the pain...really great job...awesome n true:)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Love is rough. People are rude.
This poem showcases both of those.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love this and definitely can relate to it :P
Great job!!!

Ashley Rivers-- Dream BIG and you'll win BIG:)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on April 26, 2012
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MusicJunkie
MusicJunkie

Kansas City, MO



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Im a normal teenage girl. Boy crazy and addicted to music. I absolutely love Allstar Weekend, along with a few other bands lol. Chocolate is always a nice addition to life too. I have found that my on.. more..

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