Pain Makes Me Stronger

This is the first poem I have ever written. A guy broke my heart and I will always be scarred, but I'm stronger.

I wish I could say

That all the scars go away

But sadly they stay

And bad as it sounds

Through all of this I have found

Pain makes me stronger

I took what you gave

And relive it every day

As means to succeed

You thought you had won

But the game had just begun

Guess what, I win now

Thought the scars remain

I live without all the rain

Pain makes me stronger.

Reviews

[Kora Williams]

I liked it, but i got kind of confused as i read.
Good for your very first poem though. :)

[The Flame of the Knight]

very good. Very good.

[Opposum]

I just wanted to give your your first review but that was really good. I loved it and I'm not sure I can come up with any grammar errors so awsome, keep writing :)