Mirror

Mirror

A Poem by .Lost Soul.
"

What my mirror means to me

"
I hate what you show me
I wish you wouldn't show me it
I can't help but think your false
But i know you tell truth
You reflect exactly what's told
I see things in you
That are horrid
I want to change them
But i can't
I was okay with it
When i felt better about going to you
But i guess that's gone
All those years i went to you
And said, "looking good,"
They ran away
When my self confidence
Sprinted away too


© 2012 .Lost Soul.


Author's Note

.Lost Soul.
Little personification goin' on there :p

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This sparked something in my head, and so i will write it only for you.

A person who does not approve of oneself is comparing oneself to another. And a person who compares oneself to another is making the mistake of thinking everyone else is better. A person who thinks everyone else is better obviously believes in a perfection. And so a person who believes in perfection will only see themselves with defection.

There is no such thing as perfection
and so there is no such thing as defection.
Stop fooling yourself and love your reflection
Or you will waste your life drowning in self created rejection

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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The Mirror shows your image
Yes correct that's True
but remember its society
That's told those lies to you

For you are sure a beauty
A Wonder and a gift
Just your presence makes me glad
Gives my spirit a lift

You mirror told you the truth
of how gorgeous you are!
You more amazing than the heavens
More brighter than the stars

So Take off all the blinders
and open up your eyes
and see your TRUE Reflection
I'm sure you will be surprised....

Allot of girls feel this way, but please remember, pop Culture does not define you, it you who defines you, and you have the power to be a beautiful person. Just start on the inside. I can see from just meeting you, you already are that wonder.


Posted 12 Years Ago


.Lost Soul.

12 Years Ago

thank you :)
I liked it. Self worth is so important

Posted 12 Years Ago


I wish your truith was better looking... huh cool write and if ya aren't satisfied with the image in the mirror that's not good. Its not even the outside that counts its the inside! Be happy with youreself

Posted 12 Years Ago


was there an intended 'I wish your truth was better looking' in there? If so, Nice quote, miss shakespeare! Well played

Posted 12 Years Ago


i really liked it, i like how you said the mirror lies, cuz thats what i think they do, they show you what you dont want to see, whether its the truth or a lie

Posted 12 Years Ago


This sparked something in my head, and so i will write it only for you.

A person who does not approve of oneself is comparing oneself to another. And a person who compares oneself to another is making the mistake of thinking everyone else is better. A person who thinks everyone else is better obviously believes in a perfection. And so a person who believes in perfection will only see themselves with defection.

There is no such thing as perfection
and so there is no such thing as defection.
Stop fooling yourself and love your reflection
Or you will waste your life drowning in self created rejection

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Self confidence? True. Lost? False. Nothing is lost til you give in on what's not there and what's not there cannot be true. For when life gives you the worst you can show what's true and bring up what's you.
-Trusting

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is very different. Love it.

Posted 12 Years Ago


You know, I didn't even peak at the title and I knew immediately what this poem was about. This is so powerful, and has an effect that's beyond it's words. Thank you so much for the great write! :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is sooo good! :)

~Veronica Lynn♥~

Posted 12 Years Ago



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.Lost Soul.

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