Cutters Cry

Cutters Cry

A Poem by .Lost Soul.
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The silent weep

Of a cutters cry

Only it's not tears

That shed from her eyes

But red, fresh blood

From the open slash

That's how cutters

Silently crash

© 2013 .Lost Soul.


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Amazing flow. The word has a good best to them. What is so odd about cutting is that bleeding is more comforting than crying. Of course there is crying but you feel like you can't control it.

Posted 11 Years Ago


.Lost Soul.

11 Years Ago

Exactly.
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Simple and Powerful < 3

Posted 11 Years Ago


I clicked on this by accident and I'm so glad that I did. I love the flow of the poem as well as the imagery. Very nice work.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This had a good flow. I used to be a cutter. And I agree with it. Cutters do crash right after that. It's hard to not cut now, but I can't go back. Thanks for sharing. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Angie Diane&hearts;&hearts;

11 Years Ago

O.o I don't. The only time I get hurt anymore is at work by accident. Card board hurts sometimes...
Silent Knight

11 Years Ago

Tell me about it.
Angie Diane&hearts;&hearts;

11 Years Ago

Yeah I have a cut from one. It's gonna scar just like the last one.
good peace but we are never alone just remember that

Posted 11 Years Ago


exelent writing

Posted 11 Years Ago


Remember, you are not alone. Stay beautiful, stay true, stay you, stay strong. ♫

Posted 11 Years Ago


short and silent...good one

Posted 11 Years Ago


that is exactly how it is. I love that you made it rhyme and how realistic you made it sound.

Posted 11 Years Ago


I like it, it's really good.!!

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Added on April 9, 2013
Last Updated on April 11, 2013
Tags: Self-Harm, Cutting, Monster, Self-Hate, Hate, Blade, Secrets, Bully, Dying, Suicide, Done, Pain

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.Lost Soul.
.Lost Soul.

Central Maine, ME



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