The Raven

He flutters

on soft breezes

slim and fragile.

Tinted feathers

glide through air,

shimmering deep violet

in the setting sun.

Author's Note

reviews?

Reviews

[Mazie Tackett]

nice imagery you could see it happening before eyes while reading this

[Laura S.]

Lovely descriptions! very visual, I love it.

[Coyote Poetry]

Nice description create good visions. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Starrbitt]

short but very descriptive (: