Goodbye Kiss

umm...

Water down my cheeks

Pillows over my lips

There is nothing so sweet

As your goodbye kiss.

 

My mind drifts away

And all I know now

Is the complicity

Of you, and me

 

Why did you go

and leave me here alone

My world crumbles in

My thoughts fade to black

 

I close my eyes

And see yours instead

Dim and cold

As you turn away

 

The pain in my chest

The tears in my eyes

All because of

Your goodbye kiss.

Author's Note

PLEASE review!!

Reviews

[Lokesh]

Sorry to be rude but I don't understand your poem.

[Angelic Surrender]

So sad. Good work

Dopeness man. Love the sorrow reminds me of an anime for some reason.

[dontwakeme]

Very beautiful and sorrowful. I hope no one ever has to go thorough the pain described here...

[Davey Jones]

I almost cried dang write something very happy now

Awesome write. Vary emotional and it reminds me of one of my ex girlfriends

[❀ Gabriela ..]

Emotional and beautiful. Great work!