Snowglobe

reviewws..?

A snow globe in the dark

so cold and

alone.

Pieces of myself

floating amid fake snow.

You shook me up

left me spinning

around.

upside down and sideways.

And my heart can't take it.

Reviews

[Ezekiel Silver]

An unusual perception of how a snow globe would be like if it was sentient. I rather like it! I do think that in future works you should try to put in some rhyming or alliteration, but that's just my suggestion.