War Of The Devils Fleet

I saw the bullet fly past my face,

This was war!

War of the devils fleet,

The dead walk with guns and cross bows,

Killing every child,

I see the sad bodies as i climb over,

My hand falls through empty flesh...

Author's Note

This is a work in progress- please review!

Reviews

[KittyVenus]

I'm looking forward to reading the finished poem xxxx

[SonOfPlunder]

This could be the start of a really good piece. Will be checking back on this!