Death In My Soul

There is beauty in your eyes,

I hope it never dies,

Murder in the death hole,

As presumable as a dice roll,

Suicide in my heart,

We shall wait until we depart,

Stay away demon, foul,

You make me scream and howl,

A slice in my wrist,

Don't you love this,

A cut on my throat,

No need to gloat,

Death is good now,

Shall I wait until the last bow,

I want to cry,

I hope I die,

This is my last day,

Just get out of my way,

This coffin is where I lay,

And again, I wait until the last day,

You cant make me stay awake,

I have a death bed to make,

You can't make me hide,

I will commit suicide,

I lay awake,

The snow dropps in flakes,

On the window pane,

I will never feel any pain.

Author's Note

I wrote this in maths... I got suicidal thoughts in maths- its so bad... I hope you like it!

Reviews

[Aptitudex]

suicidal thoughts right after lavender town music? makes sense xD. anyways, wholly great poem as per usual and keep uploading!

[xDalliance]

Such sadness in this poem. Death shown as a relief from pain. Again, the rhyming is perfect, but I felt that some parts were a little disjointed from the poem. Anyways the poem is still good. The emotions are very well brought out. Good one kitty :)