Once In The World Of Death

What did I say?

I said hey!

You didn't respond,

My heart got thrown into a pond,

I could feel on my lips, your breath,

Only once in a world of death.

You didn't reply,

I told you not to lie!

You only did,

You only hid.

You only have to accept,

Its only once in a world of death.

Its like im in a cardboard box,

Heart like crunching rocks,

Walls closing in,

You held up my chin,

And thought to suggest,

Once in a world of death,

Falling through the sky,

I'm likely to die,

Wind through my hair,

I thought you wouldn't dare,

I thought you were perfect,

Once in a world of death.

Author's Note

this is possibly my longest ever poem! sorry if it bores you... XD

Reviews

[Aptitudex]

i like it if there long, it gives more of a read. great poem as per usual :) i wonder who you could be talking about? xD

[KittyVenus]

mr ginger face

[Aptitudex]

U have to totally be kidding me :p