humanity

the world is something we need to hold on

dangerous, but still with grace

courageous, but still in place

then your realize humanity is selfish, their only actions for their own needs

making cities not caring about the livings there, we cover the world like weeds

we slaughter animals to eat what we want ,we think we can do anything, but we cant

all will last generations long

till suddenly all is gone

and then the last moments of humanity, we  will think of what we all did wrong

Reviews

[Pandora E.]

I really enjoy the message of this piece, it's something I often find myself thinking about too. My only advice would be to continue editing and improving on certain phrases and punctuation, other than that great work :)

[minder]

i really appreciate the commentary. i will be editing and improving my work