I really enjoyed the first three chapters. What immediately stood out is your writing style. It's complex, energetic, brazen, and has a nice flow to it. I wanted to keep reading so there ya go :)
I love words. I work with conceptuality, with metaphysics, with the vast expanses of the mind. I can tell stories through my words when I find myself unequipped to do such in my present reality. I owe.. more..