Confused and Abused

Confused and Abused

A Poem by metaljelly
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This is a song I'm working on inspired by a girl at my school who goes to me when she needs to talk about her problems. These lyrics are about what she's told me.

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Confused, abused

Crying and dying

She's breaking down from the simple sound,

of her broken family spewing their insanity.

She's their little acessory.

Of course she doesn't matter.

but she's crumbling down mentally

one wrong move and her blood might splatter

Lets start with mommy

the one who brought her here

unstable wreck

morals seem to be her fear

peace of mind anything but near

emptiness filled with material objects

crazy woman who no one respects

yelling and screaming seems to be her way to cope

for this poor woman I don't see much hope

.....(to be cont)

 

 

 

© 2011 metaljelly


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this is an amazing poem i loved it so much, i touched my heart

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Added on April 15, 2011
Last Updated on July 19, 2011
Tags: Stress, Verbal Abuse

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metaljelly
metaljelly

Alameda, CA



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Transplanting into me, the brain of an unstable maniac with a complex in the thoughts, and an itch in the conscience; and yes, I'd like a side of fries with that. I am an observation and a sponge of w.. more..

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