No More Tears

over coming pain

 

Within Crimson Dark Skys

Comes Placid Tears of Rain

 

The Dark Tranquil Winds

Pierces Through All Sense of Harmony

 

The Silhouettes of Extensive Trees

Castaway Their Impure Leaves

 

The Solitude of The Night

Silence...While Uproars Rage

 

Oblivious To The Surroundings

Trying To Find This Oasis

 

Into A Morbid Cloud

Symptoms of Failure Lay Throughout The Land

 

The Storm of Shameful Suns

Rain Their Dismay Upon The Innocent

 

The Storm Has Passed On...

No More Tears

 

Reviews

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wonderful work...excellent choice of words... the imagery is very descriptive, and the structure works well... the blend of emotions is very impressive ..and the strong metophors sprinkled throughout the work gives it a strange beauty... with a wonderful a flow



the pain,misery and anguish portrayed throughout ends with a soothing ending ..and a ray of optimism...

a treat to read...
keep writing...

take care:)
niki:)

[Sharpdeath]

Very nice.
It is quite true what you have written.
There will be no more tears.