Tangible Heart

Tangible Heart

A Poem by Tay

 

I look into your eyes so beautiful and brown

Without a single word u pick me up when I am down

My finger in your fingers my hand inside your hands

A feeling in my stomach that I still don’t understand

 

Being tempted by your lips with my fingers on your hips

Running down your thighs staring deeply in your eyes

Kissing on your neck going back t were I start

Just tryna touch my favorite body part, and that’s......your heart

 

© 2008 Tay


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Theres a few typos but still it's a really good write... very passionate... and i love the favorite part being the heart... Really cute!

Posted 16 Years Ago


This is passionate, playful, seductive and tender! You really display so many emotions--all within eight lines! Fun to read and finds one thinking of their own special someone! Endearing!

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on February 23, 2008

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Tay
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PHILLY PHILLY, PA



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